Hello!
I think this is a great improvement from your last application! However, I have some advice to give you that will help you.
Don’t forget to include the hash tag and the numbers!
Why are these your specialties/weaknesses? You should add more information!
I recommend starting off with a smaller server to help you with your experience. This will prove that you work well with a team.
Your builds are good, but you can improve them. Try adding more types of builds. Also, you should include more builds.
You should go here to see accepted builder applications and here for tips on writing one.
I hope you found this useful! 