Hello!
I think your overall application and builds are great! I think you’ve added lots of detail to your application and it seems great! I only have one critique, however.
It’s important to work on smaller build teams and work your way up! This will prove that you work well in a team.
If you have any doubts concerning your application, go here to take a look at accepted builder applications and here to take a look at some tips!
I hope you found this useful! 