This can use a little work, if you take a look at accepted applications it has a lot of detail, but this is also good.
There are a few grammar mistakes, that you can fix.
Other than those,
+0.5
I wish the best luck to you <3
This can use a little work, if you take a look at accepted applications it has a lot of detail, but this is also good.
There are a few grammar mistakes, that you can fix.
Other than those,
+0.5
I wish the best luck to you <3