Hello!
Your map is good, but I think you do any of the following to improve it:
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Use the proper format - Proper formatting is very important. You included some of the information, but go here to see the full format.
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Add more platforms - The map looks pretty empty, so I think you should add more platforms. I highly recommend adding some more that are entirely on air.
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Add trees inside the map - You should add more trees to the map. I don’t recommend using a sapling and bone meal, but you should create your own custom pine trees.
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Include more textures on the ground - You should mix in more white blocks to the grounds such as quartz blocks or snow blocks!
Hope you found this useful!