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no

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Less grass, more stone, more enunciated waterfall, pond, varying stones and roots with the trees. Id probably add more oomph to the mountain. Not bad though!

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Thanks for your feedback! :slightly_smiling_face:

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More texture/color would be amazing. Like adding andesite, granite, gravel and the dirt variations.

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Thank you very much! :slightly_smiling_face:

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Your build is not bad. I like the shape of it just a few points that would make it better:

  • add more stone and less dirt
  • try to make some self builded trees
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Thank you all! By the way, I have a secret!

Secret

I built this over a month ago and I basically put no effort into it, so I want to improve it!

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Build it in a jungle biome worldedited out so the grass is luscious

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Thanks!

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There are many parts of the mountain that have sides that are just flat with no change in elevation. Try to alter that.

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I will do that! Thanks!

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If you are looking for some constructive criticism and professional feedback, then you have summoned AloneTM. First of all, this mountain right here has a lot of flaws, mainly of coloring and size. In the coloring perspective, I think there is way too much grass in the mountain and you need to lessen the amount. As the block to be replaced instead, I see you are trying to go for a more natural look, so try to add blocks that are very similar to stone to add a variety of blocks. For example, cobblestone, andesite, gray wool, or gravel. In the sizing perspective, I think this mountain right here is very tall compared to how narrow it is. I suggest making the mountain steeper and adding more erosion. If you are purposely trying to make it this tall with barely any width. I suggest trying to pick a good atmosphere to put this mountain in, for example, fitting the surroundings and generally blended in. Here is an example, https://prnt.sc/svpm70
Now, in the picture that I have provided above. You can see that the mountain is blended within the island. The mountain that I have shown has a lot of block variety and shows a theme within the build. The initial design of the mountain is very similar to yours but has a lot more detail. In detail, this mountain has a second mountain coming off to the side, it includes some steepness and some erosions. The block variety shows a lot of blocks which is good for detail and looks better. I hope this helped!

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did you build that mountain cuase it looks really good and the feedsback helped me also alot with my mountain so thx <3 (do you have any tips to get the diorite, clay, etc mix right? i Always mess up at this point)

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bad =)

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wdym bad? if you think its bad than give feedback please

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Thank you for all of your opinions and criticism! I really appreciate it! :slightly_smiling_face:

@Fr33VBucks, could you give me constructive criticism on it?

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no im being sarcastic

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