Map name: Sand Storm
Creator: Kudderstrim
Map type: Normal
Parkour block: Gold ore
Players spawn on the gravel
Images:
drive link to the map:
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1XmwBFkWnfUxE0kxlD-2cdCT97v1stcBB/view?usp=sharing
Map name: Sand Storm
Creator: Kudderstrim
Map type: Normal
Parkour block: Gold ore
Players spawn on the gravel
Images:
drive link to the map:
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1XmwBFkWnfUxE0kxlD-2cdCT97v1stcBB/view?usp=sharing
Pros:
Good platforms
Nice map
Cons:
Final rating: +1
Honestly? It looks really good. It has a clear structure, good platforms, it had a nice asthetic and especially the four platforms at the top are really interesting. Only problem I have is still the sandstone because that will hurt my brain, but as discussed previously, that’s more on me. I really like it! You seem to have put in a lot of effort.
CLEAR +1 FROM ME :D
Thank you everyone for the positive reviewes :D
despite the minimal block palette I think this looks really cool! Only complaint would be that the platforms at the top might be quite annoying to fight on with the holes haha, and It’d be nice for there to be more flat spaces for pvp. c:
Whats your rate?
And the holes at the top is to make some of the pvp ‘interesting’ haha
Yeah I really like it! +1 from me!
You took the constructive criticism to heart and improved upon your original design. It’s paid off and I think it’s a really cool map. I can see it being in rotation. +1!
Looks good! I love simpler maps like this. Also, what @Zammyz said about the flat pvp areas :)
Looks nice!
I have a small feeling you used sandstone if not then np, because you would instantly die when you stand on sand stone.
Ignoring the map for a second, the gold blocks with your texture pack look strange to me
Back to the map, it looks amazing and like something I would definitely want to play on
Edit: the reason they look weird to me is because they’re gold ore… I thought they were the full blocks but then I saw one of the images and realized it was gold ore…
Edit 2: Also, this is just my opinion, but you probably shouldn’t be telling people in-game to go and look at your map. Just what I think though
I’ve added more platfroms for PvP
I think you’ve done a great job including enough platforms and places to go while not overdetailing.
My only (minor) issue with it is the main 2 blocks that are being used are sandstone and red sandstone.
I think you should try to give it a bit more color, maybe adding things like
These are completely my opinions - if you don’t like any of the suggestions feel free to do whatever you’d like.
Despite this, I still think this is a very nice map overall
Good concept, but I’d like to see more color.
Helixed mentioned some stuff above me, which I think would add more detail and color into the map.
Otherwise, it looks good for gameplay.
Do you like the new screenshots? :)
The torches are cool, but the chest sticks out like a sore thumb because it isn’t detailed enough. Try changing up the block palette and I think you’ll find it will fit the theme better.
Also, with the torches, I find the bodies of the torches (the wood parts) are a bit too thick. This could just be the angle that the ss was taken from. Anyway, great additions! I might also take off some of the vines, because you can clutch on them.
Keep in mind, though, this is just my opinion.
Still, I love the concept!
Maybe even add in some desert temple designs, fits with the colours
fixed it?