Hey there!
I have a few things to say concerning your application!
I think your build has a good amount of detail, but it would be great if you included more builds! Try to include some more of your specialties and other types of builds!
I also recommend including large-scale builds! I recommend building more maps, spawns, et cetera!
My final piece of advice is to take a look at accepted builder applications and the Builder Application Tips/Guide! These will really help with what they are looking for!
I wish you the best nonetheless!